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Commercial Space: The Hawaii Moon Declaration

SpaceExploration Tuesday, December 9, 2003 . This is a SciScoop post by gpmap

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Another recent article from Space.com: A worldwide gathering of lunar experts has called for a sequence of technological, exploratory and commercial missions culminating in the establishment a human presence on the Moon.
The Moon is currently the focus of an international program of scientific investigation. Current missions underway or planned will lead to the future use of the Moon for science and commercial development, thereby multiplying opportunities for humanity in space and on Earth. We need the Moon for many reasons: to use its resources of materials and energy to provide for our future needs in space and on Earth, to establish a second reservoir of human culture in the event of a terrestrial catastrophe, and to study and understand the universe. The next step in human exploration beyond low Earth orbit logically is to the Moon, our closest celestial neighbor in the Solar System…
… To encourage and stimulate the peaceful and progressive development of the Moon, we recommend that the international community of national space agencies, companies and individuals operate and maintain an exploratory mission at a pole of the Moon to serve as a catalyst for future human missions within a decade. Our vision is one of expanding humanity into space on an endless journey. We believe a human return to the Moon is the next step into the Solar System and the future of the human race.

8 Responses to Commercial Space: The Hawaii Moon Declaration

Sweetwind

December 10th, 2003 at 10:01 am

I thought the “I” in “I had asked Dyson and other top scientists” was gpmap! But it’s Robert Roy Britt, the Space.com author. This is something of an editorial comment, could you to make it more clear in the future when you are quoting the source and when you are writing your own words? Actually I like to see quoting kept to a minimum, I always prefer to read someone’s summary (like your last two sentences of the first paragraph) than to read batches of quotes. Also when you do quote I would like to see an indication when there is a gap in the quote, i.e. there should be an ellipsis between “perhaps Mars” and “Sir Martin Rees.” (You did that in the second paragraph, I see! Good!) Please do keep the stories coming, gpmap, even if it’s just the pertinent quotes — and maybe it’s just me, and everyone else knows that the leading colon signifies the beginning of a quote?

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Anonymous

December 10th, 2003 at 7:37 pm

Can someone provide a link summarizing Robert Zubrin’s vision of a Mars Mission project?

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rickyjames

December 11th, 2003 at 3:16 am

is here.

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gpmap

December 11th, 2003 at 11:45 am

Thanks for the advice Sweetwind. Some use italics to separate source from comments, but this is not rendered in RSS, which is how I prefer to read my favorite news sites. Perhaps I will use [brackets]. What I post here is cut/paste from my own blog (see my user info page): I repost entries to other sites depending on the subject, so I have to think of compatibility with different styles. Any advice welcome, too bad there is no agreed standard.

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Sweetwind

December 12th, 2003 at 7:47 am

Hmmm, I don’t know anything about RSS so I am stumped. I presume that the HTML tag <blockquote> won’t work. How about “quotation marks”? Hey, they MUST get through because you included some in the quoted text in your story, right? :-) Now the trick is, if there are already quotation marks in the text you are quoting, you convert them to ’single quotes’ so they don’t close out the material that YOU are quoting. At least I think that is the rule in ordinary English. I need help from an English teacher – gypsysoul are you out there??

So my proposal would yield something like:
From Space.com, an interesting article on the future of space exploration: “Space visionary Freeman Dyson, the acclaimed emeritus professor of physics at the Institute for Advanced Study in Princeton, New Jersey, recently had a conversation with Robert Zubrin, the world’s biggest cheerleader for human missions to Mars. ‘Your scheme of Mars missions is excellent,’ Dyson said …”

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gypsysoul

December 15th, 2003 at 6:31 am

You are exactly right.

By checking out gp’s web site, http://www.prisco.info/giulio/, I understand that he’s used to playing by different rules, but more paragraphing and clarifying punctuation would certainly be helpful, along with more links for those who would like to get to the original source quickly.

I hesitate to offer even a comment after the early days when BOB got his Fruit of the Looms in a wad over someone’s “inserting typos” into his writing :-).  RJ graciously allows me to feel useful by fixing his Tennessean predisposition to  ”there’s many ways…” and wandering commas.

Your example, however, is perfect.  

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Sweetwind

December 16th, 2003 at 9:32 am

It’s been quite a while since I learned those rules in school. I’m sure I’ve mangled and twisted a lot of them in the meantime, but luckily that one survived intact :-)

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gypsysoul

December 16th, 2003 at 9:59 am

You really gave a clear explanation and good examples of how gp might improve the format of his interesting posts.

I should have done that myself, but I’m honestly somewhat gun-shy after those few early previous experiences.  Okay, so I’m a coward… that’s closer to the truth :-)

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